A Princess of Mars: First Idea Pitch

This is the first pass for my take on the "A Princess of Mars" story by Edgar Rice Burroughs. I wanted to depict sort of a cowboy western feel mixed with Asian elements (gun fighting and swordplay), but also wanted to create a very dramatic atmosphere what with enormous enemies and barren environments.
I've been given the go-ahead to use this for my end of term final, but seeing as how we need 3 more idea pitches, I think I'm going to try to tackle Fahrenheit 451 next and see which direction I want to go.